beta request

[words_unravel]

STILL NEEDED :D

Soooo.

I have a fic that is approximately 12,000 words. It's not quite done, I have to rework one scene and insert some lyrics, but I should be able to get to that tonight. after that it will be ready for beta (yaaaaaay, finally!).

I'd like several to take a look at it - regular grammar nazis, of course, but I would really like someone (or someones) to go through it and tell me what works, what doesn't, hey! you need a scene here, or this is kind of rushed, etc, etc, etc.

This is pretty much the longest thing I have written to date, so I really would like to make sure that the flow is good/appropriate/whatever.

So, if you've got the time and would like to undertake this task, I would be mightily grateful - just drop me a note!

Comments

[spindlelimbs.livejournal.com]

OMG YOU FINISHED IT!!! *\o/*

[prettykitty-aya.livejournal.com]

I DID!!!

...now i just need to finish my h/c fic this week.

[spindlelimbs.livejournal.com]

We should mutually support each other!
Mine hasn't gotten any further than where it was two weeks ago /o\

[prettykitty-aya.livejournal.com]

oh man, i'm really going to get started on that sucker tonight. it only has to be 1000 words, so i'm going to try and at least get a first part or something that is that long. maybe leave it open to a continuation? it's just a thought though.

mutual support sounds awesome!

[spindlelimbs.livejournal.com]

I'm already past 1k but it really can't stop there :/ Ryan hasn't even OD'ed yet!
But maybe it can work? Open ends are great, I love those. I think I'll use it for mine too.

Maybe it'll be easier if we talk on aim? lol

\o\ /o/ \o\
*dances*

[prettykitty-aya.livejournal.com]

lol, i'll be on later tonight if you wanna holler at me :D

[cloudlessclimes.livejournal.com]

Gimme! By which I mean I'd be thrilled to beta for you!

[prettykitty-aya.livejournal.com]

sweet! i'll send it over this evening when i've got it all in order <3 <3