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words_unravel) wrote2004-07-28 08:34 pm
words_unravel) wrote2004-07-28 08:34 pm
a little warmup...
okay, decided to actually do a writing warm-up before finishing my piece for nmas...this came from Nickelback's "Figured You Out" lyrics:
Shane stood at the sliding glass door, staring out at the large wooden deck. He could see the sun reflect on something, a bright flash from one of the large lounge chairs near the end of the house. He wondered what Zach had left out overnight.
Who knows? he thought, the other boy had been so trashed last night, it could be anything.
Sliding the door open, he made his way towards the deck chair. Almost immediately he could see the watch which had glinted so bright a moment ago. A watch that was most decidedly still attached to its owner, wrapped around a slender honey-colored wrist.
He smirked--apparently incredibly drunk to have passed out here--
As he drew closer, the firgure splayed across the chair came into full view. Shane stopped cold. A warm bubble of laughter made its way up from his chest, tumbling over his lips. Zach had fallen asleep.
Stark naked. Completely nude. Birthday suit in all its glory.
Another laugh burst out. And the sound caused the sleeping figure to shift, a hand reaching down to lightly adjust himself. Shane's eyes were drawn by the movement, his gaze roaming over the taught body and finally to the growing erection nestled in the light brown curls.
It's just too damned tempting...
Kneeling quietly by the chair, he ran his fingertips lightly over Zach's length. A moan fell from sleeping lips at the touch. Shane bent over the prone figure, placing his lips close to an exposed ear, "Time to wake up, Zachary. Time's a wastin'..."
'kay, that's what i got in 15 minutes (and after previewing it, seems like not alot for that amount of time), course i went on to for another 20 minutes, but i thought i would at least post this much...just so you know, its rough draft with almost no editing....so tell me what ya think...'cuz i need to know....please...*puppy dog eyes*...
Shane stood at the sliding glass door, staring out at the large wooden deck. He could see the sun reflect on something, a bright flash from one of the large lounge chairs near the end of the house. He wondered what Zach had left out overnight.
Who knows? he thought, the other boy had been so trashed last night, it could be anything.
Sliding the door open, he made his way towards the deck chair. Almost immediately he could see the watch which had glinted so bright a moment ago. A watch that was most decidedly still attached to its owner, wrapped around a slender honey-colored wrist.
He smirked--apparently incredibly drunk to have passed out here--
As he drew closer, the firgure splayed across the chair came into full view. Shane stopped cold. A warm bubble of laughter made its way up from his chest, tumbling over his lips. Zach had fallen asleep.
Stark naked. Completely nude. Birthday suit in all its glory.
Another laugh burst out. And the sound caused the sleeping figure to shift, a hand reaching down to lightly adjust himself. Shane's eyes were drawn by the movement, his gaze roaming over the taught body and finally to the growing erection nestled in the light brown curls.
It's just too damned tempting...
Kneeling quietly by the chair, he ran his fingertips lightly over Zach's length. A moan fell from sleeping lips at the touch. Shane bent over the prone figure, placing his lips close to an exposed ear, "Time to wake up, Zachary. Time's a wastin'..."
'kay, that's what i got in 15 minutes (and after previewing it, seems like not alot for that amount of time), course i went on to for another 20 minutes, but i thought i would at least post this much...just so you know, its rough draft with almost no editing....so tell me what ya think...'cuz i need to know....please...*puppy dog eyes*...
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