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words_unravel) wrote2009-09-22 07:40 am
words_unravel) wrote2009-09-22 07:40 am
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beta request
STILL NEEDED :D
Soooo.
I have a fic that is approximately 12,000 words. It's not quite done, I have to rework one scene and insert some lyrics, but I should be able to get to that tonight. after that it will be ready for beta (yaaaaaay, finally!).
I'd like several to take a look at it - regular grammar nazis, of course, but I would really like someone (or someones) to go through it and tell me what works, what doesn't, hey! you need a scene here, or this is kind of rushed, etc, etc, etc.
This is pretty much the longest thing I have written to date, so I really would like to make sure that the flow is good/appropriate/whatever.
So, if you've got the time and would like to undertake this task, I would be mightily grateful - just drop me a note!
Soooo.
I have a fic that is approximately 12,000 words. It's not quite done, I have to rework one scene and insert some lyrics, but I should be able to get to that tonight. after that it will be ready for beta (yaaaaaay, finally!).
I'd like several to take a look at it - regular grammar nazis, of course, but I would really like someone (or someones) to go through it and tell me what works, what doesn't, hey! you need a scene here, or this is kind of rushed, etc, etc, etc.
This is pretty much the longest thing I have written to date, so I really would like to make sure that the flow is good/appropriate/whatever.
So, if you've got the time and would like to undertake this task, I would be mightily grateful - just drop me a note!
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Mine hasn't gotten any further than where it was two weeks ago /o\
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mutual support sounds awesome!
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But maybe it can work? Open ends are great, I love those. I think I'll use it for mine too.
Maybe it'll be easier if we talk on aim? lol
\o\ /o/ \o\
*dances*
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